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Post by silentpartner on Dec 4, 2018 22:22:26 GMT -5
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Othello Rating for the overall Show (0-5):
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Post by Cosmo Cooper on Dec 16, 2018 11:11:00 GMT -5
Othello Rating for the overall Show (0-5): 5
Favorite Match: Elina vs. Vannah
Favorite Segment: Rex Rumble being talked into getting a Twitter account/Every Brad Stokes segment ever.
Most Shocking Outcome: Dropping the Elina is out right at the end of the show was so well done.
Most Memorable Moment: Zack's title win over Cross .
MVP of the Show: Vannah, she brings something so fresh to the current state of RPing. I absolutely have loved her stuff so far.
Overall Thoughts: I really see more of a Lucha Underground style of storytelling when I read these shows. Not writing out action but instead letting the announcers dialogue tell the story keeps me engaged in these longer matches. Thank you all for your hard work.
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Post by Vannah White on Dec 16, 2018 12:43:20 GMT -5
Othello Rating for the overall Show (0-5): 5!!!
Favorite Match: Zack Fantana vs. Cross Recoba Favorite Segment: Brodie/Willie Pete
Most Shocking Outcome: Zack Fantana becoming UnYeilding champion (from a in character/show perspective)
Most Memorable Moment: Krahe's antics during the Unyielding title match.
MVP of the Show: Zack Fantana (honorable mentions to Krahe).
Overall Thoughts: The Unyielding title match was the best special guest referee match I have ever read. The best take on a heel special referee I have ever seen with the psychology off the hook! AMAZING job on this one guys. Right now, this is my favorite feud in Valor and it has so many layers to it, it's fun and everyone involved is doing an amazing job building this right now. So, congratulations to those involved. Also, would like to give a shout out for the write of my match vs. Elina Cartel, who did an AMAZING job playing up both characters. The handshake spot between the two was amazing and really showed the writer is in touch with the ongoing of the characters on the show.
Some of you have probably heard this already, but Valor has had the best quality on time results I have ever seen. It's something that you usually only can get from Angle feds.
Finally, all things considered; I appreciate seeing that our recent departures were handled with pure class on the show. On and forward, ladies and gents!
P.S - I finally got a criticism! Let's bring back the Othello ratings after the match, I always thought that was a neat touch!
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Post by brodie on Dec 16, 2018 13:41:45 GMT -5
Othello Rating for the overall Show (0-5): 5
Favorite Match: Cosmo v Devlin
Favorite Segment: Stokes/Blossom
Most Shocking Outcome: Fantana winning the belt
Most Memorable Moment: I think the way the chars were written out was amazing and is memorable in its own right
MVP of the Show: Blossom - I think he maybe gets underappreciated by some as a char and it’s such a fucking awesome concept.
Overall Thoughts: I said this before but, I really think the attention to detail on these shows is outstanding, there are so many characters and such a diverse group, yet someone nothing gets missed or overlooked; the details in the commentary and the flow of the stories is astounding too and the ability to change things up when people leave is really impressive.
The whole flow of the show is fantastic. And personally, for me, this is the most involved I’ve felt as far as character direction and feuds that I’ve ever been - I’ve also said before, Brodie is a very erratic character, she’s all over the place, which is the intent, but I feel like despite that, her energy as a whole on the show is so well written and expressed, I couldn’t do it better myself.
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Post by Davy Blossom on Dec 18, 2018 23:06:05 GMT -5
Othello Rating for the overall Show (0-5): Look, I'm carrying inherent bias giving this a rating. I only actively read cards that my characters are in, and those are all summarized matches. That being said, unless there's another fed out there that's engaging in GOOD commentator dialogue while still highlighting the aspects of the match and the show is also action-packed with segments that are well-written by the handlers, point me to it. Otherwise, this will be a consistent 5 by comparison.
Favorite Match: Look, I'm carrying inherent bias giving this a favorite. Zack Fantana is my favorite wrestler, even in real life where he technically doesn't exist. A win this big for him is dear to my heart. But honestly, the lead-up to it and Krahe's involvement gave it the little extra edge over what would have been my favorite match on any other card in Cosmo/Devlin. Plus, it still leaves a LOT open for Recoba, the way a good match should pan out.
Favorite Segment: Look, I'm carrying inherent bias giving this a favorite. I am all about a call-and-response promo. They deliver, and they serve their purpose in shining a big ol' fuckin' spotlight on the character in focus. But Brodie. Brodie is that woman who was a senior when I was a freshman who paid me attention, but I was so uncomfortable in my own skin that I couldn't tell if she was trolling me or not. That vibe now carries over in a pretend wrestling character. This is honestly one of the most refreshing takes on a creepy CREEP I've seen. Undeniable charismatic appeal despite the fact that you're expecting a knife to get acquainted with your neck the second you turn your back on her. She shook an ex cult leader and took his spot.
Most Shocking Outcome: Look, I'm...Vannah White with the score over the champ. IC. Sure, it was a capitalization on an injury, but a win is a win.
Most Memorable Moment: Mainly for scope, but I think the Cosmo/Brennan result is going to be something worth remembering when they're pitted against each other again.
MVP of the Show: The fans, who put up with Brad Stokes lollygagging for like 10 fucking minutes to get in the ring and then had to wait another 10 minutes for Davy and Elegance to get situated, only to deliver about 5 minutes worth of actual interview.
Overall Thoughts: Hey, this place has everyone involved in some shape or form. It's really an even playing field where you don't have one or two just hogging all the fucking attention. Like any good movie or TV show, EVERY CHARACTER MATTERS. Thank our illustrious leaders for that scope of vision, 'cause they know how to run a fed. And, thank yourselves for being captivating and good at what you do.
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