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Post by Staff on Jun 2, 2019 10:07:00 GMT -5
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Othello Rating for the overall Show (0-5):
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Post by Deleted on Jun 2, 2019 12:13:29 GMT -5
Othello Rating for the overall Show (0-5): 4.5
Favorite Match: Ours. Okay, real answer... damn Spiral/Jennings, what a bout.
Favorite Segment: Brodie's end segment
Most Shocking Outcome: Cross/Devlin, always shocking to see #1 contender stuff get shaken up
Most Memorable Moment: Spiral's interference post match
MVP of the Show: Cross
Overall Thoughts: This was another excellent show. Now I'm starting to get a real vibe on stuff. I see that for the most part, a format is adhered to. Sometimes it is not. It shifts it into a different show. I think that's a smoothing over thing. I see it done pretty much throughout with correcting details and transitioning into the next piece. And this is on us as segment writers but overall the executive direction, too. I've always felt that it was never the role of the show narrator to inject too much opinion. So while I believe Dempsey's manager is within her rights to say what she will about Matt King. In fact, I outright laughed. Jack Dempsey is a delight. However, I think the narrator shouldn't affirm her views. We all have very different styles of writing but I've always viewed the show as a neutral ground where we tone back certain aspects for the greater whole. Show narration is clearly word of god and word of god called Matt King trash.
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Post by Jack Dempsey on Jun 2, 2019 12:30:08 GMT -5
I'll add my own feedback once I have had some time to digest the show, but I wanted to reply to this comment first: I've always felt that it was never the role of the show narrator to inject too much opinion. So while I believe Dempsey's manager is within her rights to say what she will about Matt King. In fact, I outright laughed. Jack Dempsey is a delight. However, I think the narrator shouldn't affirm her views. We all have very different styles of writing but I've always viewed the show as a neutral ground where we tone back certain aspects for the greater whole. Show narration is clearly word of god and word of god called Matt King trash. Thank you for this feedback, definitely will help me improve the segments I write moving forward.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 2, 2019 12:39:00 GMT -5
I'll add my own feedback once I have had some time to digest the show, but I wanted to reply to this comment first: I've always felt that it was never the role of the show narrator to inject too much opinion. So while I believe Dempsey's manager is within her rights to say what she will about Matt King. In fact, I outright laughed. Jack Dempsey is a delight. However, I think the narrator shouldn't affirm her views. We all have very different styles of writing but I've always viewed the show as a neutral ground where we tone back certain aspects for the greater whole. Show narration is clearly word of god and word of god called Matt King trash. Thank you for this feedback, definitely will help me improve the segments I write moving forward. With that said, dude, I'm green here too. Mike and I are still learning with our stuff too. So I was just stating opinion based on past experience. For all I know Matt King doesn't give a shit. Whatever is approved on the show is between you and the fed. I absolutely loved the segment, I just see it as a vision of the fedhead sort of thing. That could just be the style. I've seen it done before.
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Post by Jack Dempsey on Jun 2, 2019 12:44:24 GMT -5
I'll add my own feedback once I have had some time to digest the show, but I wanted to reply to this comment first: Thank you for this feedback, definitely will help me improve the segments I write moving forward. With that said, dude, I'm green here too. Mike and I are still learning with our stuff too. So I was just stating opinion based on past experience. For all I know Matt King doesn't give a shit. Whatever is approved on the show is between you and the fed. I absolutely loved the segment, I just see it as a vision of the fedhead sort of thing. That could just be the style. I've seen it done before. Same here, I'm green as grass. This place is my first venture into this kind of collaborative writing. You make a very valid point with the narration. I like the idea of keeping it neutral and as a result, improving the continuity of the show.
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Post by Cross Recoba on Jun 2, 2019 17:24:21 GMT -5
Othello Rating for the overall Show (0-5): 4.75
Favorite Match: Jennings/Spiral
Favorite Segment: Cosmo/Stokes. Cooper did a great job of reminding everyone of the highlights so far in his tenure.
Most Shocking Outcome: The UnYielding matches lately are becoming the hardest to call within the company
Most Memorable Moment: I think the Djurdevic/Burchill ending was played really well. I was a little surprised not to see a rematch at the PPV.
MVP of the Show: Spiral
Overall Thoughts: I could have submitted a dozen versions of this feedback because, by and large, everyone brought it this week. One small thing is I can't decide if Yensman's cameo was enough or if there should have been more - and I mean that as a compliment.
All of the matches stood out in their own ways and delivered something different but also maintained things that made the actual character pop out for the competitors. Equally, all of the segments pushed their stories well.
From the first seg to the last this sold the next PPV and looking down the card I'm hard-pressed to predict any of the matches, which means that the next one of these I do will be an enjoyable headache.
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Post by spiral on Jun 5, 2019 15:06:49 GMT -5
Othello Rating for the overall Show (0-5): 4.5
Favorite Match: Spiral/Jennings. I obviously didn't write it so I feel okay picking it.
Favorite Segment: Where There's Stokes There's Fire.
Most Shocking Outcome: Cross over Devlin. Shocking isn't the right word because Cross and Devlin are two of the best in Valor. Out of character, everyone is so evenly matched it's hard to pick a shocking moment. So IC, Spiral would say Devlin simply because Dev beat him straight up.
Most Memorable Moment: Cross getting that 1-2-3.
MVP of the Show: It's gotta be Cross.
Overall Thoughts: Great show as always.
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